Cool announcement! I will be giving free feedback on your writing and offers 🙂
This will come in the form of posts on my personal FB page and this website, which may also be re-purposed as emails to my list at a later date. I’ll choose one person’s post (either a value post or a direct offer post) and write my own post breaking down what is great about it and what can be improved.
I’ll tag you in my post (in the FB version of the post) and include a direct link to your original post so my readers can see what I’m reviewing.
This means that the post must be somewhere public (your FB profile, your FB business page, or your website, for example), rather than in a group, because not all of my readers may be members of said group to be able to view the post.
You also have the option of sending me a link to your page or profile where you have a selection of many posts, and letting me know that I can choose any post I like to review.
(or send me multiple links to different posts)
Anyone can submit to be considered for this, but I’ll give preference to the posts that at least attempt to follow my frameworks already.
I.e. – if it’s clear that you haven’t studied my methods at all and the post is light-years away from adhering to the frameworks, I won’t choose it.
For those who are new here, my methods for writing posts and constructing offers have a track record of bringing in pre-sold leads for high-ticket offers and helping coaches in every niche imaginable to bring in multiple clients per month consistently, earning 10k-100k per month (depending on price of offer), and either without sales calls at all or dramatically reducing both the length and number of their sales calls.
If you’re not familiar with my methods for posts and offers (or with the kinds of feedback that I tend to give) you can check out these two training videos that break down the two types of posts I teach:
(the second one also includes a segment of me giving feedback on readers’ submitted posts)
My goal for these reviews will be to help all of you to understand my concepts better so that you can get far more clients from your posts (as examples tend to be the most helpful for people’s understanding, but I don’t want to make an example of specific people without their permission).
A secondary goal will be to get more clients for my own program, by previewing for you the kind of feedback you’d get if you were a client of mine.
(If you’re not familiar with my paid program, more information on it is available here.)
You can submit your posts either as a comment to this post on Facebook or by DM’ing me on Facebook.
This offer to review posts will remain open indefinitely (as I plan to make “feedback posts” a regular feature). 🙂
By submitting, you’re of course consenting to have your name used in my post and to have me share a link to your original post.
You’re also agreeing to leave the original post up “as is” and not edit it after I give my feedback – as that would diminish the value and lessons for my readers, and my feedback would no longer make sense.
As always, I pledge to be very kind as I deliver my feedback, and not to make you wrong.
There are many ways to write client-attracting content and I am only an expert in my way – so I won’t be saying things like “the wording you used here is wrong,” but rather, “In my own business and my work with clients, this is how we do it, this is the reason why, and this is the result it has gotten for us.”
I honor everyone who is confident and brave enough to put themselves out there for feedback in this way.
Also, I expect a large number of submissions, and therefore regret that I anticipate not having the time to get to everyone.
To guarantee receiving feedback (and not just on one post but on as many as you want to send me!) you can always sign up for my program 😉 assuming you’re a good candidate for it, which we can check via Facebook DM.
Questions? Comment here and let me know.
Otherwise, I look forward to receiving your posts and having all of us learn a lot from analyzing them 🙂
TO SEE ALL OF THE FREE FEEDBACK POSTS I HAVE WRITTEN SO FAR, CLICK HERE